Sela Locke

Man, I love your poetry. I remember reading the name of this a long time ago, and it sounded so... mysterious. Really, Smi. With talent like this, it's almost physically ...

Wow Nu, you actually took a turn being the nitpicker. It becomes you nicely. xD I will fix dese things soon, but in the meantime, put up more 'Ever Happily'!!! ...

Okay, I'm finally getting around to paying you back for your reviews. Since these are all in the same thread, this will be QUITE a long critique, so buckle down, ...

Enormity of this story is in my portfolio, simply named 'Sourblood'. Get it now?! xD

Thanks! I really like Steph Meyer, too! I owe you a review. I'll try to get around to it sometime soon. 0_0;

Okay, I'm starting with some random stuffs. But then maybe it was only what he was implying Unless he actually is implying something, wouldn't it be better put as 'But ...

Once again, enormity of Sourblood in simply named, 'Sourblood' thread. =D

Mmhhm. Once again, I am reminded vividly of a small Mexican boy. Well, maybe not small. But still. NOW. I can't critique anything, really. But I WILL suggest that you... ...

To be honest, it was hard to stay through the duration of this chapter. There's not much description; I have absolutely no idea what any of them look like. However, ...

You can find the enormity of Sourblood in the one, first thread. Simply titled, 'Sourblood'. ;)

Don't worry Nans. The similar character thing is going to work out nicely. However, I will put in more description, and add the next chapter. :D

This may begin oddly, but trust me, it will stay that way, so don't go away. ^^ ------ Trying hard to not think of something isn’t always the best idea, ...

Thanks so much! ^^ Reviews are so friendly. xD No, since the door was open, when he slapped her, she stumbled back into the hut, but they could both still ...

I have nothing to edit technical-wise, only I see a certain symbolism in this text. Nuuuu. I thought you were over it all. And now you're falling in all over ...

Well then! -Tries not to explode with a feeling of accomplishment- Stop stroking my ego. It makes me feel too... cool. Although I'm sure Rick doesn't mind that you think ...